¶ … Wrongful Convictions' by Balko Radley discusses the issues surrounding the conviction and imprisonment of innocent persons. It outlines the causes of wrongful convictions and the challenges encountered in trying to obtain compensation upon release. The author seeks to show how prevalent wrongful convictions are, and demonstrate the need to address the same. The story of Paul House - who was wrongfully convicted of murder, sentenced to life imprisonment, and released more than two decades later with serious health complications, after his innocence was proven - is used to demonstrate the pain and suffering caused by wrongful convictions. The article employs a highly formal tone, as demonstrated by the use of such legal jargons as qualified immunity, mandatory minimum sentence, and civil liability, among others. It makes use of a passive voice, focusing on the actions (false testimony, overreliance on eyewitness testimony and false confessions) rather than on the doer; and the author speaks as an educated person addressing a group of his peers. This is evidenced by the fact that he does not provide explanations to the complex jargons used, in the assumption that the target group --...
I would use images, for instance, including cartoons, to illustrate a police officer coercing a witness to confess to a crime they did not commit so as to create a feel of drama and humor; graphs in place of figures; and an eye-catching subject line to draw the attention of all readers, regardless of their profession. As it is, the article only appeals to persons in the legal profession, and perhaps scholars and researchers; but not interested laymen.Our semester plans gives you unlimited, unrestricted access to our entire library of resources —writing tools, guides, example essays, tutorials, class notes, and more.
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